More homework for NaNoPlotMo's pacing workshop! The idea: pick some of your writing, go through it and keep track of the pacing. Where is it going slow, going fast, and does it fit the story? Go here for more info: From Super Speed to Slow-Mo - Style and Pacing
about the story snippet:
I fear I'll throw you in the middle of a story here. My main characters have fled their hometown and think they are safe. They travel to a different town, because they ran out of money and they think they can make some over there. However, there is a stranger on the road that disrupts their plans. Lienne is the POV character here, the naive, innocent 'little' girl of the group. My remarks are bold, and refer to the text before it. Sometimes I mean a single paragraph, sometimes the entire text since the previous bold remark.
Let's start reading, eh?